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Softened by blood by ~koran17:iconkoran17:



Who knew that bloody hands
could feel so soft
Lips tainted with substances
shouldn't be so fun to kiss
contaminated lungs
shouldn't say such wonderful things
a guilty concience
should never be so intelligent

but those blood softened hands
the chemical-sweet lips
the tarnished poetry
the bent wisdom
is far more lovely

than soapy-clean hands
hard with inexperience
Lips water pure
unflavored and bland
spotless lungs
with meaningless words
and unblemished minds
dulled with misuse
©2005-2009 ~koran17
:iconkoran17:

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:iconnohbudy:
From this poem, i get that you are saying that it is soo much eaiser to love someone that has character, than one who does not. I totaly agree with you. You say that very well with this poem, realy opening the mind on such things.

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moob
:iconpinocchio-liez:
Oh my god...this is soooo....whew! I'm at a complete loss for words for this piece...bravo man :worship:!!

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May God help me if I ever have to use my art...:blackrose:

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